Introduction
A. The setting of the beginning of my story is at school. Then we go from the school to the corner then Candy's house.
B. The main characters are Nicole, Shadari, Dashawndaquasia, Zyquasia, Jenifer and Danibel.
C. No. At the beginning u think everything is just fine. In the middle of the story you start to feel the rush of our friendship.
Rising Action
A. the main characters go throw a change in the story. the all go throw something in the story.
B. they care about their friendship aand hurting the people the love. mostly they care about being the badest girls in the school.
Climax
A. the most impotant event in the story is the fight that takes place.
B. the turning point is when they all turn against Candy
Falling Action
A. the direct result is they dont speak and they leave her out of everything they do together.
B. After she moves away they continue with their friendship and she is no longer a member of the family.
Resolution
A. they learned that u can not always trust people. they were affected mentally.
B. the characters will choose their friends wisely. they will evaluate their friends now and people will start getting cut off.
Friday, May 21, 2010
Wednesday, May 19, 2010
Character Biography
Dashwndaquasia Johnson
Dashawndaquasia is 17 and she is among the popular people and she is puting herself in so0o many positions to try and fit in and just cant take it any more. she has been a victim of rape and is trying to keep it a secret until she finds out that the people she has been hanging out wiit has bgh the same been through the same thing she has been through and even more. she lives wiit her friends in a six bedroom apartment. She has been living wiit her friends since middle school. She is cute funny smart and outgoing.
Dashawndaquasia is 17 and she is among the popular people and she is puting herself in so0o many positions to try and fit in and just cant take it any more. she has been a victim of rape and is trying to keep it a secret until she finds out that the people she has been hanging out wiit has bgh the same been through the same thing she has been through and even more. she lives wiit her friends in a six bedroom apartment. She has been living wiit her friends since middle school. She is cute funny smart and outgoing.
Monday, May 3, 2010
Chapter One
On3 daii Jenifer came 2 skool nd sh3 was cryinq. So0o Dashawndaquasia ask3d h3r nd she saiid she was cryinq cuz she got in a ton of trouble. she later found out that candy told her that she should run away from home. she did waht Candy advised her to do and ran away from home. Candy's mom called ACS and now Jenifer has a worker. Nicole, Shadari and Dashawndaquasia were trying to keep Candy as far away from each other but they stayed together.
The next day me and Nicole came together to talk about how we should keep them away from each other.Candy came to skool and they were 2g3ther. That daii we made them feel like they did some thing wrong. That same daii Jenifer found out that Candy had givin Jenifer lice. Jenifer (IS TENDER HEADED) had to have her head searched and scrud hard to remove the lice. She then realized that she should not have had Candy do her hair.
The next daii jenifer stayed far away from candy as possible and candy tried to get closer and closer. Until Candy gave Jenifer lice for the second time. Mean while Nicole, Shadari and dashawndaquuasia were all happy there was no problem. Until Dashawndaquasia got threats on aim from Candy's "cuzzin" and drama broke loose all cuz of Candy's lies. Shadari wasz in dha midle she had all dhese friends and cared about all of them. Three weeks later Jenifer, Candy Shadari, and Dashawndaquasia went a party in the project building and they were raped.
The were terrorized by what had happen and they joioned an all womens support group. they relized they were closer than they thought. Mean while Nicole was making new friendsz wiit Zyaquasia. Zyaquasia and Nicole became very within short period of time. Zyaquasia is being kept away from the other girls in the house. Nicole was the one keeping her away from the other girls in the house.
"I wanna fight Candy." said Jenifer. "Y u wanna fight." said Dashawndaquasia. "cuz she stay talking shit and ii wanna pop off." "oooh shit!" said Dashawndaquasia. meet meii at Candy crib witt the other girls. dashawndaquasia went to the house gathered up the girls and we all met up at Candy's house. we got to Candy's house and jenifer went up and said that she wanna fight and Candy ran the house and got some girl name Danibel.
Danibel rolled up and acted like she was gonna do something. she came out like there was a problem. ''who wanna fight Candy and y ya wanna fight ha.'' said Danibel. ''we wanna fight cuz she stay talking shit." said niclole "who dha fuck are u any way.'' said Jrnifer
''im Candy sista in law thats who dha fuck ii am." said danibel "well ya sista in law iis pussy and we wanna fight ha.'' said Jenifer ''nobody fightinq unless ya fightinq meii iight'' danibel said Danibel. ''ii told u ha pussy ass aint gonna fight. iima walk up to ha and jhuss clock ha and then iima fight ha iight.'' said nicole
she walked up to Candy and punched ha in dha nose and the began fighting.
Nicole slaped ha and she did nuthing and then she dragged ha and Candy did nothing again. The reason Candy did nothing is because she swear she can fight but really she is pussy. they fought and Candy moved and went to live with her father and they never spoke to Candy again.Everybody in the house contnue being friends and Candy made a whole new group of friends.
The next day me and Nicole came together to talk about how we should keep them away from each other.Candy came to skool and they were 2g3ther. That daii we made them feel like they did some thing wrong. That same daii Jenifer found out that Candy had givin Jenifer lice. Jenifer (IS TENDER HEADED) had to have her head searched and scrud hard to remove the lice. She then realized that she should not have had Candy do her hair.
The next daii jenifer stayed far away from candy as possible and candy tried to get closer and closer. Until Candy gave Jenifer lice for the second time. Mean while Nicole, Shadari and dashawndaquuasia were all happy there was no problem. Until Dashawndaquasia got threats on aim from Candy's "cuzzin" and drama broke loose all cuz of Candy's lies. Shadari wasz in dha midle she had all dhese friends and cared about all of them. Three weeks later Jenifer, Candy Shadari, and Dashawndaquasia went a party in the project building and they were raped.
The were terrorized by what had happen and they joioned an all womens support group. they relized they were closer than they thought. Mean while Nicole was making new friendsz wiit Zyaquasia. Zyaquasia and Nicole became very within short period of time. Zyaquasia is being kept away from the other girls in the house. Nicole was the one keeping her away from the other girls in the house.
"I wanna fight Candy." said Jenifer. "Y u wanna fight." said Dashawndaquasia. "cuz she stay talking shit and ii wanna pop off." "oooh shit!" said Dashawndaquasia. meet meii at Candy crib witt the other girls. dashawndaquasia went to the house gathered up the girls and we all met up at Candy's house. we got to Candy's house and jenifer went up and said that she wanna fight and Candy ran the house and got some girl name Danibel.
Danibel rolled up and acted like she was gonna do something. she came out like there was a problem. ''who wanna fight Candy and y ya wanna fight ha.'' said Danibel. ''we wanna fight cuz she stay talking shit." said niclole "who dha fuck are u any way.'' said Jrnifer
''im Candy sista in law thats who dha fuck ii am." said danibel "well ya sista in law iis pussy and we wanna fight ha.'' said Jenifer ''nobody fightinq unless ya fightinq meii iight'' danibel said Danibel. ''ii told u ha pussy ass aint gonna fight. iima walk up to ha and jhuss clock ha and then iima fight ha iight.'' said nicole
she walked up to Candy and punched ha in dha nose and the began fighting.
Nicole slaped ha and she did nuthing and then she dragged ha and Candy did nothing again. The reason Candy did nothing is because she swear she can fight but really she is pussy. they fought and Candy moved and went to live with her father and they never spoke to Candy again.Everybody in the house contnue being friends and Candy made a whole new group of friends.
Wednesday, April 14, 2010
Dha Besties
This novel I am writing is called " The Besties." this novel is for teens and adults who are intersted in schools that have drama. My book is about my friends what goes on about in my life and the drama I face in school. the begining of my book is gonna be about what type of friends i had and what we went through together.
This book is about the girls she is 11 and she has been excepted into a new school and in her old school she was not known as something she was proud of. In the new school she wants to prove herself. She has this group of friends that is dragging her down a wrong path. She really wants learn and she doesn't want to be mocked as she was in the old school.
This book is about the girls she is 11 and she has been excepted into a new school and in her old school she was not known as something she was proud of. In the new school she wants to prove herself. She has this group of friends that is dragging her down a wrong path. She really wants learn and she doesn't want to be mocked as she was in the old school.
Monday, February 8, 2010
Thursday, January 21, 2010
The Birmingham Essay
The Civil Rights Movement was led by Rev. Martin Luther King Jr. and Rev. Fred Shuttlesworth. The Civil Rights Movement was to use the National Guard to enforce the desegregation laws. They used King and Shuttlesworth to lift the Negro laws. The Negro laws were very strict. The laws prevented black people from freedom and freedom of speech and many other privileges.
The characters in the Watson go to Birmingham the author used things to show that the book is about 1963. The 16thstreet church was bomed on September 15 1963.
Tuesday, January 19, 2010
My Second Draft
the Watson's are good parents because they care about the well being of there kids. one example that they are good parents is when they sent Byron to grandma sands. They sent Byron there because they felt that Byron might get himself in some serious trouble. one of the reason Byron is lately getting in lots of trouble is because he is hanging out with buphead. Mrs. Watson thinks that buphead is a bad influence on Byron. Ever since Byron started hanging out with Buphead.
Wednesday, January 13, 2010
The Watsons Go To Bermingham Entrie #1
Sept. 15, 1963
today was absolutely crazy. i never expected to have to go save my sister from a bomb. Today started as the usual except i woke up late. when i woke up i was told by my mom that Joetta's church was bombed i told Byron to go and check it out but he didn't go. so i went. when i got to the front steps of the church i saw some kids that weren't moving my first thought was that '' I hope that one of those kids aren't my sister.'' i got closer and saw the shiny shiny shoes Joetta wore to church today. I got a little scared because I thought just might that joetta might be ''Dead.'' I started to get scared until i heared a little girl's voice. I yelled joetta is that you. The little girl was getting closer and closer. it was joetta we raced for each other i got her hand and we left I gave her her shoes and we went home. we were very excited to know joetta was safe and sound. that is how i spend my day.
Sincerly,
Kenny
today was absolutely crazy. i never expected to have to go save my sister from a bomb. Today started as the usual except i woke up late. when i woke up i was told by my mom that Joetta's church was bombed i told Byron to go and check it out but he didn't go. so i went. when i got to the front steps of the church i saw some kids that weren't moving my first thought was that '' I hope that one of those kids aren't my sister.'' i got closer and saw the shiny shiny shoes Joetta wore to church today. I got a little scared because I thought just might that joetta might be ''Dead.'' I started to get scared until i heared a little girl's voice. I yelled joetta is that you. The little girl was getting closer and closer. it was joetta we raced for each other i got her hand and we left I gave her her shoes and we went home. we were very excited to know joetta was safe and sound. that is how i spend my day.
Sincerly,
Kenny
Tuesday, December 22, 2009
Christmas Break Homework
The Watson's are good parents because they care for their kids. It shows they're care for the well being of their children especially Byron. The Watson's are good parents because they care about their children and because the well being of their children. the well being of the kids are very important to Mrs. and Mr. Watson especially Mrs. Watson.
In the book on p.65 her quote was " I swear that with God as my witness." My response to that quote was his mother is very strict as i said in the beginning the well being of her children is very very important to her. Mr. Watson is not as strict in the book as Mrs. Watson is.
Another example is the quote that states "i won't have you putting this family in danger." (p.65). My responses to that was i think Byron is a very dangerous kid to be around. For example they are sending him to stay with grandma sands because lately Byron has been getting in trouble because of the people he has been hanging around with. Mr. Watson is a good father because when his kids are in a stump he cheers them with his hysterical jokes.
On of her quotes are " I wont have u putting this family in danger." This shows that Byron is very careless and dangerous and reckless. another quote that shows the Watson's are good parents is " Grandma Sands is going to keep Byron for the summer and if thing don't improve or get better he'll stay there until next school year. that shows that the Watson's are good parents they are trying to raise there kids right. So far they have done a good job except Byron.
For example my sister is like Byron she to act up and my mom have to send her to jamaca to live with my dad. Now that she has spend two years there with my dad she has become a much better person. I think my mom send her there because she didnt want her to make the same mistakes my mom did while growing up. My point is that in no way is Mrs. and Mr. Watson bad parents. they are good parents and they should stick to wat they do. In conclusion the Watsons are good parents.
In the book on p.65 her quote was " I swear that with God as my witness." My response to that quote was his mother is very strict as i said in the beginning the well being of her children is very very important to her. Mr. Watson is not as strict in the book as Mrs. Watson is.
Another example is the quote that states "i won't have you putting this family in danger." (p.65). My responses to that was i think Byron is a very dangerous kid to be around. For example they are sending him to stay with grandma sands because lately Byron has been getting in trouble because of the people he has been hanging around with. Mr. Watson is a good father because when his kids are in a stump he cheers them with his hysterical jokes.
On of her quotes are " I wont have u putting this family in danger." This shows that Byron is very careless and dangerous and reckless. another quote that shows the Watson's are good parents is " Grandma Sands is going to keep Byron for the summer and if thing don't improve or get better he'll stay there until next school year. that shows that the Watson's are good parents they are trying to raise there kids right. So far they have done a good job except Byron.
For example my sister is like Byron she to act up and my mom have to send her to jamaca to live with my dad. Now that she has spend two years there with my dad she has become a much better person. I think my mom send her there because she didnt want her to make the same mistakes my mom did while growing up. My point is that in no way is Mrs. and Mr. Watson bad parents. they are good parents and they should stick to wat they do. In conclusion the Watsons are good parents.
Friday, December 18, 2009
My Trip To The African Burial Ground
Slavery ended in new york during the 1700's.African Americans that were slaves back then went through pain and suffering. Located in lower Manhattan close to Foley square, just north of city hall at 290 Broadway in new york you will found the historical African burial ground.The African burial ground is a burial ground that is historical memorial, and the best burial ground an African American would want to see.
The role that African Americans played during the 1700's and 1800's in early history and life in the city of New York.Our ancestor left us with freedom and a historic back ground but not their names[meaning no one know who they were].In 1646 slaves were sold for 150 dollars.In 1700 the negro brokers started up.In 1790 the slaves were buried but in 1794,the burial ground was discovered .In 1993 the landmark was made.The African Burial Ground is one of the most important parts of African American history.
The African Burial Ground is a living tribute to past ,present and future generations.Maya Angelou once said "you may bury me in the bottom of Manhattan".I will rise''."My people will get me''."I will rise out of the huts of history's shame".
The role that African Americans played during the 1700's and 1800's in early history and life in the city of New York.Our ancestor left us with freedom and a historic back ground but not their names[meaning no one know who they were].In 1646 slaves were sold for 150 dollars.In 1700 the negro brokers started up.In 1790 the slaves were buried but in 1794,the burial ground was discovered .In 1993 the landmark was made.The African Burial Ground is one of the most important parts of African American history.
The African Burial Ground is a living tribute to past ,present and future generations.Maya Angelou once said "you may bury me in the bottom of Manhattan".I will rise''."My people will get me''."I will rise out of the huts of history's shame".
Friday, December 11, 2009
High School
High school will be different because in high school teachers will not give you second chances. High school will be much tougher than middle school. High school pressers will not be so nice about the work you give in. high school teachers are very strict about the rules in high school.
also, the kids at also tougher than they would be if you were in middle or elementary school.
also, the kids at also tougher than they would be if you were in middle or elementary school.
Wednesday, December 9, 2009
Chapter 5
1. The word that desribes Mrs. watson is forgiving. She is forgiving because she said ''I swear that with God as my witness.'' '' By got put on punishment for a month but even before a week was gone he started up againn.'' (p.65)
2. Mr. Watson is a joker. Most of what he's done so far in the book is crack jokes. On p. 3, Kenny says "...we knew Dad was going to try to make us forget about being cold by cutting up." On. p. 16, Mr. Watson can hardly stop laughing when Byron gets his lips stuck to the car because he was kissing the windshield. These examples both show that one way Kenny's Dad deals with bad situations is by laughing.
3. Mr.and Mrs, Watson would make great parents. They would make great parents because on (p.33)it says that she packed more food because her son had to share his food with kenny.
2. Mr. Watson is a joker. Most of what he's done so far in the book is crack jokes. On p. 3, Kenny says "...we knew Dad was going to try to make us forget about being cold by cutting up." On. p. 16, Mr. Watson can hardly stop laughing when Byron gets his lips stuck to the car because he was kissing the windshield. These examples both show that one way Kenny's Dad deals with bad situations is by laughing.
3. Mr.and Mrs, Watson would make great parents. They would make great parents because on (p.33)it says that she packed more food because her son had to share his food with kenny.
Monday, December 7, 2009
Chapter 4 Quiz
1. Momma had lived in Flint for fifteen years.
3. The kids at Clark Elementary school didn't not have to wear layers of clothes like Kenny and Joey.
5. Byron treated his the sister not like Kenny or any other kids.
11. Joey stopped complaining after she heard Byron's story.
3. The kids at Clark Elementary school didn't not have to wear layers of clothes like Kenny and Joey.
5. Byron treated his the sister not like Kenny or any other kids.
11. Joey stopped complaining after she heard Byron's story.
Wednesday, December 2, 2009
Chapter 2 Quiz
1. Larry Dunn was the most popular kid in Clark elementary because he was twice as strong as the rest of us. (p.20)
3. For Kenny there were advantages to having an older brother who was a god he got teased less about his eyes than he would have. (p.21)
5. Demonstrating his his reading ability to other classes made him enemies with the other students. (p.22)
8. Kenny suspected that Byron was proud of having a little brother who was smart.
(p.25)
9. Kenny waus born with a lazy eye that wanted to rest at the corner of his eye, his brother told him to look at people at the corner of his eye.
13. Even in Byrons absence he didnt feel safe until God sent him his savers. (p.27)
14. the bus driver never waited for late kids when she saw them running to the school bus. (p.28)
17. The two new kids had ragedy shirt and ripped up jeans. (p.29)
18. The students were not afraid of the two new boys and wanted to tease them.(p.30)
3. For Kenny there were advantages to having an older brother who was a god he got teased less about his eyes than he would have. (p.21)
5. Demonstrating his his reading ability to other classes made him enemies with the other students. (p.22)
8. Kenny suspected that Byron was proud of having a little brother who was smart.
(p.25)
9. Kenny waus born with a lazy eye that wanted to rest at the corner of his eye, his brother told him to look at people at the corner of his eye.
13. Even in Byrons absence he didnt feel safe until God sent him his savers. (p.27)
14. the bus driver never waited for late kids when she saw them running to the school bus. (p.28)
17. The two new kids had ragedy shirt and ripped up jeans. (p.29)
18. The students were not afraid of the two new boys and wanted to tease them.(p.30)
Tuesday, December 1, 2009
Reading Response HW#55
The book I read is called ''Paravana's Journey''. It is about a girl who's
family gets broken up. So, she sets out on a journey to search for her mother and
sister and brother. Along the way she finds a boy in a cave with half a leg. The boys
name is ''Asif''. The boy tells lies about what happened to his leg. Every time
someone asks him what happened he tells a different lie. He decided to join her. Along
the way she also find a baby and decides take the baby along with her. She finds a
girl in the woods and she dies along the journey.
family gets broken up. So, she sets out on a journey to search for her mother and
sister and brother. Along the way she finds a boy in a cave with half a leg. The boys
name is ''Asif''. The boy tells lies about what happened to his leg. Every time
someone asks him what happened he tells a different lie. He decided to join her. Along
the way she also find a baby and decides take the baby along with her. She finds a
girl in the woods and she dies along the journey.
Friday, November 20, 2009
The Watsons Go To Birmingham Chapter One Quiz
It was so cold on Saturday the Watsons sat huddled together under a blanket on the couch.
Momma felt the cold the most because she was from Alabama.
Kenny \
and his family lived in Flint Michigan.
Momma felt the cold the most because she was from Alabama.
Kenny \
and his family lived in Flint Michigan.
Wednesday, November 11, 2009
'' Say No To School Uniforms''
I am here to talk about why we shouldn’t wear school uniforms. Arguments over school uniforms have been going on since the beginning of school. Even though I go to a school where I have to wear a uniform I don’t think that students should wear them.
I disagree with President Clinton's quote because students should be allowed to express themselves by being allowed to dress the way they want to dress. Bill Clinton said in his 1996 states of the Union Address that students should wear uniforms. It would help stop violence caused by clothing and because schools need to teach good values and citizenship.
Uniforms are bad for many reasons. First, of all wearing the same color and outfit gets dull and ugly. School uniforms won’t stop inequality as many of the supporters wearing say. Violence can still happen with or without uniforms and students will still find ways to compare their clothes. It may be the jacket they wear to school or the sneakers they wear in gym class. Students will find a way to compete uniform wise. It also stops peer pressure. Just like it says in ‘’Say No To School Uniforms’’ students will want to follow the latest fashion trends.
These are the reasons school uniforms can’t solve the problems their supporters say they will solve. In conclusion I think wearing school uniforms is a bad thing. Not a good thing to wear school uniforms.
I disagree with President Clinton's quote because students should be allowed to express themselves by being allowed to dress the way they want to dress. Bill Clinton said in his 1996 states of the Union Address that students should wear uniforms. It would help stop violence caused by clothing and because schools need to teach good values and citizenship.
Uniforms are bad for many reasons. First, of all wearing the same color and outfit gets dull and ugly. School uniforms won’t stop inequality as many of the supporters wearing say. Violence can still happen with or without uniforms and students will still find ways to compare their clothes. It may be the jacket they wear to school or the sneakers they wear in gym class. Students will find a way to compete uniform wise. It also stops peer pressure. Just like it says in ‘’Say No To School Uniforms’’ students will want to follow the latest fashion trends.
These are the reasons school uniforms can’t solve the problems their supporters say they will solve. In conclusion I think wearing school uniforms is a bad thing. Not a good thing to wear school uniforms.
Friday, November 6, 2009
First Impression
'' Clothes Make the Woman-and the Man.''
I think that this will best be supported because in my essay it talks about how we need to have individuality.Students can't express individuality in uniform.
I think that this will best be supported because in my essay it talks about how we need to have individuality.Students can't express individuality in uniform.
Greeting
hey wats yall hi mii name is Jovia i wanna give a shout out to mii gurl ktylah. she is mii bestie. i tell her everthing. she know everthing about mii.
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