My Second Draft

the Watson's are good parents because they care about the well being of there kids. one example that they are good parents is when they sent Byron to grandma sands. They sent Byron there because they felt that Byron might get himself in some serious trouble. one of the reason Byron is lately getting in lots of trouble is because he is hanging out with buphead. Mrs. Watson thinks that buphead is a bad influence on Byron. Ever since Byron started hanging out with Buphead.