Introduction
A. The setting of the beginning of my story is at school. Then we go from the school to the corner then Candy's house.
B. The main characters are Nicole, Shadari, Dashawndaquasia, Zyquasia, Jenifer and Danibel.
C. No. At the beginning u think everything is just fine. In the middle of the story you start to feel the rush of our friendship.
Rising Action
A. the main characters go throw a change in the story. the all go throw something in the story.
B. they care about their friendship aand hurting the people the love. mostly they care about being the badest girls in the school.
Climax
A. the most impotant event in the story is the fight that takes place.
B. the turning point is when they all turn against Candy
Falling Action
A. the direct result is they dont speak and they leave her out of everything they do together.
B. After she moves away they continue with their friendship and she is no longer a member of the family.
Resolution
A. they learned that u can not always trust people. they were affected mentally.
B. the characters will choose their friends wisely. they will evaluate their friends now and people will start getting cut off.
Friday, May 21, 2010
Wednesday, May 19, 2010
Character Biography
Dashwndaquasia Johnson
Dashawndaquasia is 17 and she is among the popular people and she is puting herself in so0o many positions to try and fit in and just cant take it any more. she has been a victim of rape and is trying to keep it a secret until she finds out that the people she has been hanging out wiit has bgh the same been through the same thing she has been through and even more. she lives wiit her friends in a six bedroom apartment. She has been living wiit her friends since middle school. She is cute funny smart and outgoing.
Dashawndaquasia is 17 and she is among the popular people and she is puting herself in so0o many positions to try and fit in and just cant take it any more. she has been a victim of rape and is trying to keep it a secret until she finds out that the people she has been hanging out wiit has bgh the same been through the same thing she has been through and even more. she lives wiit her friends in a six bedroom apartment. She has been living wiit her friends since middle school. She is cute funny smart and outgoing.
Monday, May 3, 2010
Chapter One
On3 daii Jenifer came 2 skool nd sh3 was cryinq. So0o Dashawndaquasia ask3d h3r nd she saiid she was cryinq cuz she got in a ton of trouble. she later found out that candy told her that she should run away from home. she did waht Candy advised her to do and ran away from home. Candy's mom called ACS and now Jenifer has a worker. Nicole, Shadari and Dashawndaquasia were trying to keep Candy as far away from each other but they stayed together.
The next day me and Nicole came together to talk about how we should keep them away from each other.Candy came to skool and they were 2g3ther. That daii we made them feel like they did some thing wrong. That same daii Jenifer found out that Candy had givin Jenifer lice. Jenifer (IS TENDER HEADED) had to have her head searched and scrud hard to remove the lice. She then realized that she should not have had Candy do her hair.
The next daii jenifer stayed far away from candy as possible and candy tried to get closer and closer. Until Candy gave Jenifer lice for the second time. Mean while Nicole, Shadari and dashawndaquuasia were all happy there was no problem. Until Dashawndaquasia got threats on aim from Candy's "cuzzin" and drama broke loose all cuz of Candy's lies. Shadari wasz in dha midle she had all dhese friends and cared about all of them. Three weeks later Jenifer, Candy Shadari, and Dashawndaquasia went a party in the project building and they were raped.
The were terrorized by what had happen and they joioned an all womens support group. they relized they were closer than they thought. Mean while Nicole was making new friendsz wiit Zyaquasia. Zyaquasia and Nicole became very within short period of time. Zyaquasia is being kept away from the other girls in the house. Nicole was the one keeping her away from the other girls in the house.
"I wanna fight Candy." said Jenifer. "Y u wanna fight." said Dashawndaquasia. "cuz she stay talking shit and ii wanna pop off." "oooh shit!" said Dashawndaquasia. meet meii at Candy crib witt the other girls. dashawndaquasia went to the house gathered up the girls and we all met up at Candy's house. we got to Candy's house and jenifer went up and said that she wanna fight and Candy ran the house and got some girl name Danibel.
Danibel rolled up and acted like she was gonna do something. she came out like there was a problem. ''who wanna fight Candy and y ya wanna fight ha.'' said Danibel. ''we wanna fight cuz she stay talking shit." said niclole "who dha fuck are u any way.'' said Jrnifer
''im Candy sista in law thats who dha fuck ii am." said danibel "well ya sista in law iis pussy and we wanna fight ha.'' said Jenifer ''nobody fightinq unless ya fightinq meii iight'' danibel said Danibel. ''ii told u ha pussy ass aint gonna fight. iima walk up to ha and jhuss clock ha and then iima fight ha iight.'' said nicole
she walked up to Candy and punched ha in dha nose and the began fighting.
Nicole slaped ha and she did nuthing and then she dragged ha and Candy did nothing again. The reason Candy did nothing is because she swear she can fight but really she is pussy. they fought and Candy moved and went to live with her father and they never spoke to Candy again.Everybody in the house contnue being friends and Candy made a whole new group of friends.
The next day me and Nicole came together to talk about how we should keep them away from each other.Candy came to skool and they were 2g3ther. That daii we made them feel like they did some thing wrong. That same daii Jenifer found out that Candy had givin Jenifer lice. Jenifer (IS TENDER HEADED) had to have her head searched and scrud hard to remove the lice. She then realized that she should not have had Candy do her hair.
The next daii jenifer stayed far away from candy as possible and candy tried to get closer and closer. Until Candy gave Jenifer lice for the second time. Mean while Nicole, Shadari and dashawndaquuasia were all happy there was no problem. Until Dashawndaquasia got threats on aim from Candy's "cuzzin" and drama broke loose all cuz of Candy's lies. Shadari wasz in dha midle she had all dhese friends and cared about all of them. Three weeks later Jenifer, Candy Shadari, and Dashawndaquasia went a party in the project building and they were raped.
The were terrorized by what had happen and they joioned an all womens support group. they relized they were closer than they thought. Mean while Nicole was making new friendsz wiit Zyaquasia. Zyaquasia and Nicole became very within short period of time. Zyaquasia is being kept away from the other girls in the house. Nicole was the one keeping her away from the other girls in the house.
"I wanna fight Candy." said Jenifer. "Y u wanna fight." said Dashawndaquasia. "cuz she stay talking shit and ii wanna pop off." "oooh shit!" said Dashawndaquasia. meet meii at Candy crib witt the other girls. dashawndaquasia went to the house gathered up the girls and we all met up at Candy's house. we got to Candy's house and jenifer went up and said that she wanna fight and Candy ran the house and got some girl name Danibel.
Danibel rolled up and acted like she was gonna do something. she came out like there was a problem. ''who wanna fight Candy and y ya wanna fight ha.'' said Danibel. ''we wanna fight cuz she stay talking shit." said niclole "who dha fuck are u any way.'' said Jrnifer
''im Candy sista in law thats who dha fuck ii am." said danibel "well ya sista in law iis pussy and we wanna fight ha.'' said Jenifer ''nobody fightinq unless ya fightinq meii iight'' danibel said Danibel. ''ii told u ha pussy ass aint gonna fight. iima walk up to ha and jhuss clock ha and then iima fight ha iight.'' said nicole
she walked up to Candy and punched ha in dha nose and the began fighting.
Nicole slaped ha and she did nuthing and then she dragged ha and Candy did nothing again. The reason Candy did nothing is because she swear she can fight but really she is pussy. they fought and Candy moved and went to live with her father and they never spoke to Candy again.Everybody in the house contnue being friends and Candy made a whole new group of friends.
Wednesday, April 14, 2010
Dha Besties
This novel I am writing is called " The Besties." this novel is for teens and adults who are intersted in schools that have drama. My book is about my friends what goes on about in my life and the drama I face in school. the begining of my book is gonna be about what type of friends i had and what we went through together.
This book is about the girls she is 11 and she has been excepted into a new school and in her old school she was not known as something she was proud of. In the new school she wants to prove herself. She has this group of friends that is dragging her down a wrong path. She really wants learn and she doesn't want to be mocked as she was in the old school.
This book is about the girls she is 11 and she has been excepted into a new school and in her old school she was not known as something she was proud of. In the new school she wants to prove herself. She has this group of friends that is dragging her down a wrong path. She really wants learn and she doesn't want to be mocked as she was in the old school.
Monday, February 8, 2010
Thursday, January 21, 2010
The Birmingham Essay
The Civil Rights Movement was led by Rev. Martin Luther King Jr. and Rev. Fred Shuttlesworth. The Civil Rights Movement was to use the National Guard to enforce the desegregation laws. They used King and Shuttlesworth to lift the Negro laws. The Negro laws were very strict. The laws prevented black people from freedom and freedom of speech and many other privileges.
The characters in the Watson go to Birmingham the author used things to show that the book is about 1963. The 16thstreet church was bomed on September 15 1963.
Tuesday, January 19, 2010
My Second Draft
the Watson's are good parents because they care about the well being of there kids. one example that they are good parents is when they sent Byron to grandma sands. They sent Byron there because they felt that Byron might get himself in some serious trouble. one of the reason Byron is lately getting in lots of trouble is because he is hanging out with buphead. Mrs. Watson thinks that buphead is a bad influence on Byron. Ever since Byron started hanging out with Buphead.
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